Dure Kothaye
Bengali Short Story
By Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/26/2011
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Sokale uthei Mili bhablo sukhobor ta janay Dipu ke….
Dipu bodhhoy ghum thekeo otheni tokhon…
Phone ta korte ii khyak khyak kore uthlo Dipu…
'Eto bhorbelay phone keno korechho? Kal rate to dertay phirlam party theke'..
Phone korar karon shune aro jole gelo Dipu…
Rager golay bollo,’Ki bolle, Kerala y jachcho de-toxification korabe?Matha Fatha thik ache toh?’
Ajkal Dipu ektutei birokto hoye othe Mili r kothay…Age hole…..
She jak ge she kotha,
Khotang kore rekhe dilo phone ta Mili.
Ei niye cholbe badanubad bohudin bujhlo…
Jokhon Tina r phone ashe, tokhon to rat jege kotha bole Dipu….Ar ami phone korlei birokto… Mone mone Dipu ke galagali dite dite Mili khoborer kagoj ta niye boshlo…
Kagojer dike takiye ache Mili , kintu porche na ekbindu bujhlo o…
Janla diye Lal garita eshe daralo dekhlo barir samne…Dekhe mon ta bhalo hoye uthlo Milir.Robibar sokale Rishir garita expect koreni Mili…
Janla diye mukh baralo Mili…
Isharay Rishi aste bollo Mili ke……Gari niye long drive e jachche bodhhoy Rishi…
Bhaloi holo, rag ta komano jabe Rishir garite ghurte berole….
Jamakapor change kore, kono krome jeans ar T-shirt pore, hathe paurooti niye eshe garite bosholo Mili….
‘Ki byapar ?Kothay jachchi ?’ Mill seat belt lagate lagate bollo…
‘Eto proshno keno?’ Rishi Bollo…
‘Paurooti khabe?’ Mili jiggesh korlo…
‘Paurooti ekta khabar jinish holo?’ Rishi gari chalate chalate bollo…
‘Ki khabar jinish tahole?’
‘Ei je Sunroof khule dilam, batasher haouya khao…prokriti ke enjoy koro…sarakhkhon khai khai keno?’
‘Prokriti dhuye jol khabo?’ Dipu r kothata mone pore gelo….Dipu ar Rishi kotoi na tofat dujoner!!!
Dipu r o nischoy erokom mone hoy!! Tina ar Mili , kotoi na tofat dujoner….!!
Tina, roga Slim, attractive young…sarakhkhon togbog kore phutche….
Mili, ektu golgal ghorouya meye…parle leper tolay ii sarata jibon katiye dey…
Dipu r bhashay, ghorouya meyer requirement nei ajkal chheleder kache…Party,Bondhu Bandhob, Dance,Night Club egulor jug….
Robindrosongeet sekha Milir kache night club er taroshsho chitkare kane tala lage……..
Barite boshe pa po harmonium e gan sunei bodhhoy Dipu paliye bencheche Tinar kache giye….Ki sundor sararat dujone phushur phushur phone e kotha bole, golpo kore…Kore I jay….Ar Milir to Cynderella Syndrome ache….Nota bajlei ghume dhole pore……….She bondhur bari ii hok, ochena party ii hok…nijer bariii hok…Cynderella Syndrome nam ta Rishi ii diyeche…….
Sune Milir khub moja legeche.
Gari thamiye Rishi khabarer dokane dhuklo…
Mili ar namlo na….Ipod chaliye classical gan sunte boshlo…
Dure jeno Holde garita darano dekhte pelo. Dipu ekhane? Eto sokale?
Neme dekhte jabe bhablo, dekhlo Rishi duto coffee niye asche….
Coffee khete gari theke namlo…
Rishi cigerette jalalo…Mili or hath theke niye, ektan marlo…
Coffee ar cigerrette ta bhaloi jay…
Mili kodin porei chain smoker hoye jabe mone hoy.
Age jokhon Dipu kheto tokhon o majhe sajhe cigerette kheto.
Infact chhotobela theke prayi babar,ddar cigerrette churi kore kheto…Churi kore khaouyay ekta odbhut anondo ache…Churi kore sob kichhu koratei anondo ache, Mili bhablo….
‘Tomar bondhu o eseche dekhlam, coffee kinche…’ Rishi bollo Mili ke.
‘Oh,’ bole Mili cigerette e taan marlo..
‘Songe ekjon sundori mohila ache..’ Abar Rishi bollo…
‘Oh..’,bole abar cigerette ar coffee te mon dilo Mili…
‘Purotai to mere dile..' bole Rishi ebare duto Cigerrette dhoriye ekta Mili keo dilo…
Araame sukhtan dite dite dekhlo Dipu egiye ashche oder dike ekaii…
‘Ekhane hothath ?’ Dipu egiye eshe jiggesh korlo…
Cigerrette ta hathe niye Mili Dipr dike takiye bollo,’ Tumi ekhane? Eka ?’
Dipu ki bolbe bujhte parche na....Amta amta korche...Mili or mukhe opr phosh phosh dhounya chharche...Sob miliye besh oswasthikar poribesh...
Byapar dekhe Rishi bollo,’Ekta cigerette cholbe naki ?’
‘Na ami to onekdin agei chhere diyechhi…'Dipu , Rishi ke bolei Milir dike takalo.
'Ajkal cigerrette o khachcho..'? Dipu , Mili ke jiggesh korlo..
'Keno, khaouya uchit na bujhi? Tumi je khete?' Mili Dipur dike takiye bollo.
'She to bohudin age tyag korechhi...Purono diner kotha mone rakhte chaina..' Dipu bollo.
'Notun diner dike takale purono din ke bholai uchit..Tai na bolo?' Mili michki hese bollo..
'Achcha choli, Ja khushi koro..’, bole Dipu ulto dike hanta lagalo….
Mili r chitkar kore aro kichhu bolte ichche korchhilo...Chokh phete kemon jol aste laglo....Tai hothath coffee r glass duto niye phelar jayga khunjte laglo…
Dipu r sathe ebhabe dekha hoye jabe bhabeni Mili.
Ek I shohore jokhon dujon thake, tokhon dekha houyatai swabhabik…
Age konodin dekha hoyni keno?
Ek bochor age o jodi dekhte peto Dipu ebahabe Tinar sathe ghurchhe, tahole ektu bhalo hoto Milir.
Tina Dipu r ei somporker khobor ta sompurno ojana chhilo Milir.
Pore loker mukhe khobor choralo jokhon, tokhon jante parlo...
Bochor khanek dhore Dipu ar Tina r prem cholche...
‘Eto kotha bolte tumi Dipu,ar eta jante dile na?’..Milir gola dhore elo kemon..Du phonta chokher joltao lukano gelona….Rishi tissue paper ta egiye dilo.
‘Na bolte i ki tumi sob bujhe jao, Rishi ?’ kotha ta bolte giye o bollo na Mili.
Kichhudin agei hothath i ekdin Rishir sathe alap hoy Milir...
Ki kore jeno, Mili bhabar chesta korlo...
Tina ar Dipu ke eksathe jedin dekhlo, sedin probably..
Hya, sedin i...
Tar age, besh kichhudin dhorei, onek bondhu bandhob rai Mili ke eshe bolto, Dipu ki Tina ke biye koreche?
Mili to shune obak...Dipu, Rishi , Mili, era sobai single again...Tai bole biye?Tao Milike lukiye?
Milir biswas hoyni.Bhabto Dipu ke o eto beshi chene, Dipu oke sob kothai bole...
Dipu je kichhui bolena seta jante parlo, jokhon Dipu ar Tina ke ekdin goynar dokane dekhlo.
Sedin chhilo valentines day...Chotto duto beral er putul kine Mili opekhkha korchhilo Dipur jonno...
Phone kora sotteo Dipu phone othachchilo na....
Sedin abar Milir bandhobi eshechhilo Milir bari...Or husband ke surprise dite chay...
Shei bandhobir husband sondhe belay Milir bari eshe surprised holo bou ke dekhe...
swami ogotta ki kore? bouke goyna dite jewelery shop e niye gelo..Mili o esechhilo...oder sathe...
Hothath oi dokane Tina ar Dipuke eksathe dekhte pabe bhabeni...
Dekhe, o ar dokane na dhuke gari r kache chhole eshechhilo...
oder Garir pashei lal gari te boshe Rishi cigerrette khachchilo..
Chokher jole bhaste bhaste Mili eshe bolechhilo,'Give me the cigerrette..' bolei hath theke tene niye khete suru korechhilo...
Rishi or kando dekhe ektu thotomoto kheleo, samle niye bolechhilo,'Hi , I am Rishi..'
Mili bolecchhilo,'I don't care..'
Rishi hese bolechhilo, 'Okay, if u wish, u can come with me for dinner here..' bolei Rishi gari theke neme samner italian dokane dhuke gechhilo...
Hothath ki mone hoye Mili o or sathe dinner korte chhole gelo...
Ekhon bhebe dekhte gele , Rishi ke oidin, bhogoban pathiyeche bole Mili mone kore……
Konodin kono kharap byabohar koreni Rishi..
Dujone onek golpo kore..nana bishoye..
kokhon o gyaner kotha, kokhon o baje bhat...
Sedin ba Kokhon o kono proshno koreni Mili ke...
Or sathe thakle mone ekta odbhut shanti ashe Milir.
‘Dur paharer deshe jaouya jay ei garite chore?’Mili chokhta muche bollo.
Kono kotha na bole Rishi hashlo….
Bollo,’Dure kothao gan ta gao na…’
Dure kothay…Dure dure…
Amar mon beray je, ghure ghure….
Je banshite batash kande
Shei banshiti sure sure….
Gaite gaite abar gola dhore elo….chokh diye topash topash jol….
Dhna kore garita niye ekdom samner exit ta niye , ekta spot e garita dar koralo Rishi…
Achomka gari ghorano te, ulot palot khete khete, kono krome dhatosto holo Mili.
Mathata tule baire takiye dekhlo, ei jaygatatei Dipu niye esechhilo Mili ke…photo tulte….Tina keo enechhilo nischoy…..Dekhe kemon ga ta jole utlo Mili r…
Rishir dike takalo.
Rishi dorja khule neme abar cigerette dhoralo…
Mili namtei bollo, kannakati ta ekhanei sere phelo…Sararasta tahole phyanch phyanch sunte hobe na amake.
Kothata sune Milir aro kanna peye gelo,chitkar kore bollo,’Kotota jano tumi amar kotha?’
'Janar dorkar to nei….tobe je jonno ii kando, bhalo kore kende nao…..joto kanna ache, kende halka hoye nao…'
Milir khub ichche korchilo, Rishi r sathe dukhkhota share kore, kintu Rishi sunbe na jane….E kotha se kotha bole onno proshonge chole jabe.
Nijer kothao bishesh Rishi bole na….Mili o jiggesh korena..meyeli koutuhol jodio ache ektu….
Kichu boluk na boluk, Ei muhurte Rishike khub dorkar chilo Milir …Rishi na thakle, Mili hoyto pagol ii hoye jeto.Rishi r sathe thakle o sob kichu bhule thakte pare….Kichukhkhoner jonno holeo.
Rishir dike takiye dekhlo, ekta holde projapoti dhorte Rishi khub byasto hoye poreche…
Rishir chhelemanushi or bhalo lage….
Phik kore hese bollo,’Etake dhore ki hobe?’
‘Tomar mathar holde golap tar sathe biye diye debo..’
‘Oma,mathay holde phul amar?’ Mili obak hoye mathay hath dilo…
‘Thak ota matay ii thak…..bhaloi lagche dekhte ..’Rishi bollo.
Mili thonth ulte bollo, bhalo na Chhai…jeans ar lal T-shirt er opr holde golap..Loke ki bhabche ke jane…’
‘Bhabte dao na………kal holde saree pore kotha gechhile?’ Rishi jiggesh korlo…
‘Ami to jantam tumi proshno koro na..’ Mili bollo…
‘Na, se jonno bolini…holde golap mathay kina..holde saree porechhile nishchoy…’Rishi hese bollo…
‘Hya,porechhilam,?’Mili bollo….
‘Shei kalo chhop chhop holde saree ta?’ Rishi tokhon o projapotati take dhorar chestay byasto mone holo…
‘Tumi ki kore janle?’Mili jiggesh korlo…
‘Ota pore tomay khub bhalo dekhay…’Rishi bollo…
‘Kothay dekhle?’ Milir proshno…
‘Aah,eto proshno keno?’ Rishi or dike na takiyei bollo…
‘Bah, tumii to koto proshno korle…’Mili rag rag mukh korlo……
‘Achcha ar proshno korbo na…’bolei Rishi garite uthlo…
Mili aste aste garite uthe bollo,’Holde projapoti ta ke nebe na ?’
‘Projapoti der ki dhora jay ?Ora to onek dure kothaye hariye jay..’Rishi gari start dilo.
Mili chhol chhol chokhe bollo,’Tahole hole golap tar ki hobe?
‘Projapoti take jor kore dhore anle je or onek kosto hobe…’ Rishi bollo…
Mili kadnte kadte bollo,’Golap tar je kosto hochche….O ki kore eka thakbe?’
‘Rishi janla ta khule diye bollo,’ Oi dekho projapoti ta koto anonde urche…Oke ure jete dao Mili….’
Gari start kore jore gan ta chalye dilo Rishi…
Copyright…@Manidipa
Friday, August 26, 2011
Sunday, August 21, 2011
Talking to Me
Nijer Sathe Kotha
Bengali Short Story
By Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/21/2011
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Amar ekta bondhu ache, je naki..
Ho, ho, zani, zani………..
Hya hya jani jani mane?
Zani mane, apner ekta bondhur kotha amra zani…
Amar ekta bondhur kotha janen? Ki kore?
Ei facebook e….
Facebook e janlen?
Na ,mane, apne facebook e pray I lyakhen kina, ‘my best friend’s birthday, my friend told me…..’
Facebook e likhi shei friend ta ke?
Na, lyakhen na,mane, lyakhen nai thik I, bozon zay…….
Bojha jay?Ki kore?
Na, mane zara apnare chene, tara boze……
Apni amake chenen?
Na, syarokom sini na…
Amake serokom chenen na, kintu amar facebook poren……..
Ho, thik koisen….
Keno poren?
Apne to amar friend ..
Apni ki sotti amar bondhu?
Apnar friends list e asi to… add korsen amare ……
She to ami sobai kei add kori mostly…….Je request pathay…….
Mostly kon kyan?
Amar ek bondhur baron ache, tar bondhuder add kora jabe na kichhutei…
Apne to karur kotha shunen na …
Na shuni na, shune choli o na, kintu ami bondhu ta ke bojhate parini je ei jogote keu karur bondhu noy adote….
Bondhu na? ki kon apne?
Na bondhu keu nei karur
Tahoile Facebook ase kyan?
Facebook ache , kenona loke nijer loker opor biswas, trust hariye phelche….Tai virtual bondhutte beshi biswas korche….
Ki ze kon apme……amar koto bondhure paisi ami…..
Hya, shei to bollam…tara ekhon virtual friends…
Virtual Friends kon kyan?
Tader sathe ager moton adda maren? Kotha bolen? Virtual Friends bolei tara apnar ekhon o friends…..Ager moton Jodi sobai ek paray thakten, ek ishkul e porten, ek tiffin share kore kheten, tahole ar friends thakto na tara….
Apne asen kyan tobe facebook e?
Aami chai amar lekhaa apnar moto boka bondhura poruk ar ami aro famous hoi…
Boka bondhu koilen amare ?
Bokai to, apni bhabchhen ami apnar bondhu, kintu ami noi……….
Ar apne ze sarakhkhon amar friend, amar friend koren , tara apner bondhu?
Tarao amar bondhu noy……Keu I amar keu noy, tader bondhu rao tader keu noy…..Sobai bhabche era amar apon…ashole kichui nei….sob I mayar khela……ki moja na?
Apne ki Ramkrishnodeb er boi porsen naki?
Ta, ek jholok porechhilam boi ki…keno?
Ami kisudin Norendropur Ramkrishno Mission e porsi kina, tohon sunsi…ei sob kotha...
Ba ba…apni to besh pondit lok, ta amar kotha shonen keno?
Apnare amar bhalo lage tai.
Amake bhalo lage, apnake ami chhini?
Na sinle ki ase?bhalo lagon zay na?
Bhalo lagte i pare, tai bole amar kotha sunte hobe?
Apner mukhta khub sondor kina, tai sarakhkhon takaye thakte ichcha kore…..
Amar sundor mukher dike takiye thakte ichche kore, kothao shunte ichche kore…….??
Zee..
Zee?ki? TV?
Angge, ami Zee dekhi na, Tara Muzik dekhi…….Shei khanei apnar gan sunsi….
Achcha apod to, Zee Tara kotha theke kothay gorachche kotha ke jane….Zee bollen keno?
Angge, Zee TV to apne koilen….
Ami Zee TV bolar age apni I Zee Zee korlen……..
Zee…
Zee Zee korben na to, osojhjho lage……..
Angge….
Apni Angge o korben na……
Apner cheye boyoshe ami onek soto kina….tai …
Boyeshe apni chhoto hoten paren, ami boro hote pari….Zee Fee bolben na…amake daken ki bole?
Angge,Moni Apu……
Apu Fapu o bolben na….Ami karur Apu na, Didi na, Bon na………..hoteo chai na..bollam na, sob I maya?
Apne sob somoy choitya thaken kyan? Kotha koyon zay na……
Chote thaki ?Ami? Sob Somoy? Ei to bollen, amar dike takaye thakte ichcha kore apnar…..
Ho, Apner much tao sundor, Apne lyakhen o somotkar , kintu Samna samni apne kyamon zani…
Samna samni ami kemon jani? Ami dekhte sundor, likhio sundor…..Hummn , apni to amay bhabalen moshai…..
Mukher kotha khan apnar sundor koron lagbo…
Ei boyeshe amake change hote bolchen? Kotha sundor bolte bolchen?Hasalen Moshai…Ki kore kori?
Apne ektu kom hasen, beshi hashle mone hoy thik hoibo…byamo ta…
Hahahaha..Apnar kotha ta sunei amar kemon hashi pachche…Ami temon hashi na bolchen?
Hasen…phuto tular somoy hasen….baki somoy gombheer…
Phuto? Oh,I see….Photo tolar somoy hashi……hahaha…..khub I hashi pachche amar…
Kyan?
Kyan ki abar?apnar kotha shune amar khub hashi pachche..Apni khub mojar lok..abar ashben.
Apner kotha ta koilen na ze?
Kotha?Ki kotha bolbo?
Shei ze koitasilen apner bondhu koise …ki zyan?
Oh, shei je amar bondhur kotha diye kotha bola surukorechhilam, seta jante chaichen?
Zee..
Tara
Sony
Ki sob baje bokchen, amakeo bokachchen…..daran bhabi…
Apne bhaben, ami apnere dekhi……..
Na, orokom haa kore amake dekhte thakle ami bhabte parbo na…
Ki korum?apne ze sundor…
Sundor sundor korben na to , birokto lage.
Apner to sobetei birokto lage…..
Moteo sobete birokto lage na…….kokhon bollam ar……?
Ektu agei to koilen, zee komu na, Agge,apne koyon zaibo na, apu dakon zaibo na, apnar birokto lage……
Hya, koisi..I mean, bolechhi , ei kotha gulo sunle birokto lage, sobetei lage bolchen keno?
Oi hoilo……
Oi hoilo mane ta ki?
Apner ekta biya koron lagbo…
Biye korte hobe amake? Keno?
Apne khub lonely…………ek khan songi dorkar.
Lonely ami na……..biye korte chaile korar o onek lok ache, kintu korbo na.
Kyan?
Kyan abar ki?korbo na, korte chain na….
Nizer loker opor biswas haraye phyalsen, tai?
Biswas harai ni…Nijer lok ta je ke, setai bujhini…
Bozhon er chesta koren nai…
Hoyto bojhar chesta korini…Ar keu chesta o koreni bojhabar………..
Kyamne korbo?Apne za bod mezazi…….
Bodmejaji?ami?Ta besh...setao manlam...Kauke temon khnuje paini..holo?
Bhalo koira khnujsen?
Hya..Khunjechhi..Bhalo kore i khnujechhi..
Na Khnojen nai...Sob kisu apne na saite i paisen..Tai dekhte paan na...
Na chaitei peyechhi...? Tai dekhte pai ni?Apni to amar sob khobor rakhen dekhchhi...
Oi ze koilam, apnere amar bhalo lage....
Laguk bhalo..apni jan to moshai, birokto lagche...
Oi dhyakhen abar apner birokto lagtase..
Achcha jala toh!!Dabi ta ki bolun to apnar?
Dabii kisu nai...Ei koitasilam apner mezaj ta ektuk chora thake sob somoy....Apnere boza daay...
Kothatar mane ki?
Mane ar kisu na, ei koi ar ki...Obhoy dile koi...
Ki je bolchhen, bujhchhi na kichu....Bolun..
Ektu bhoy kortase...
Bhoy korte hobe na, ami apnake kamrabo na...ja bolar bole phelun chotpot..
Ami koitasilam ze apnere keu koite sahosh pay na...
Sahosh pay na? Keno?
Mane apne khyar khyar koren kina....
Ami khyar khyar kori? Bodmejaji? Ja khushi tai bolchen dekhi..
Apnei to koilen koite.
Achcha, kon...taratari bolun amar kaj ache..
Taratari koyon zaibo na...
Uuff baba, ki jalaton...Sunchhi , bolun..
Shanto hoiya shunon lagbo...
Ekhon abar shanto hote hobe? Keno?
Apner mon ta oshanto boilya...Nijer kotha bhaben ektu...
Nijer kotha ki bhabbo? Biye korte hobe bolchhen?
Ho...ekjon hath dhoroner songi apner lagbo..
Bollam je keu hath dhorte chayni konodin...
Saibo kyamne? Apne za...
hcha ar bolte hobe na...etuku bujhlam, amar nijer lok amar samnei ache...Ami dekhte pachchi na...ar ami bodmejaji... mejaj dekhe, keu hath dhorte sahosh pay na...Etai apnar boktobbo?
Ho..thik koisen...
Holei ba ki?Je amake nijer mone korbe, she thik eshe hath dhorbe amar…
Ami apner hath dhorte chaile diben ki?
Hath ta dhorei dekhun age, tobei to bujhben….
….Copyright @Manidipa
Bengali Short Story
By Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/21/2011
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Amar ekta bondhu ache, je naki..
Ho, ho, zani, zani………..
Hya hya jani jani mane?
Zani mane, apner ekta bondhur kotha amra zani…
Amar ekta bondhur kotha janen? Ki kore?
Ei facebook e….
Facebook e janlen?
Na ,mane, apne facebook e pray I lyakhen kina, ‘my best friend’s birthday, my friend told me…..’
Facebook e likhi shei friend ta ke?
Na, lyakhen na,mane, lyakhen nai thik I, bozon zay…….
Bojha jay?Ki kore?
Na, mane zara apnare chene, tara boze……
Apni amake chenen?
Na, syarokom sini na…
Amake serokom chenen na, kintu amar facebook poren……..
Ho, thik koisen….
Keno poren?
Apne to amar friend ..
Apni ki sotti amar bondhu?
Apnar friends list e asi to… add korsen amare ……
She to ami sobai kei add kori mostly…….Je request pathay…….
Mostly kon kyan?
Amar ek bondhur baron ache, tar bondhuder add kora jabe na kichhutei…
Apne to karur kotha shunen na …
Na shuni na, shune choli o na, kintu ami bondhu ta ke bojhate parini je ei jogote keu karur bondhu noy adote….
Bondhu na? ki kon apne?
Na bondhu keu nei karur
Tahoile Facebook ase kyan?
Facebook ache , kenona loke nijer loker opor biswas, trust hariye phelche….Tai virtual bondhutte beshi biswas korche….
Ki ze kon apme……amar koto bondhure paisi ami…..
Hya, shei to bollam…tara ekhon virtual friends…
Virtual Friends kon kyan?
Tader sathe ager moton adda maren? Kotha bolen? Virtual Friends bolei tara apnar ekhon o friends…..Ager moton Jodi sobai ek paray thakten, ek ishkul e porten, ek tiffin share kore kheten, tahole ar friends thakto na tara….
Apne asen kyan tobe facebook e?
Aami chai amar lekhaa apnar moto boka bondhura poruk ar ami aro famous hoi…
Boka bondhu koilen amare ?
Bokai to, apni bhabchhen ami apnar bondhu, kintu ami noi……….
Ar apne ze sarakhkhon amar friend, amar friend koren , tara apner bondhu?
Tarao amar bondhu noy……Keu I amar keu noy, tader bondhu rao tader keu noy…..Sobai bhabche era amar apon…ashole kichui nei….sob I mayar khela……ki moja na?
Apne ki Ramkrishnodeb er boi porsen naki?
Ta, ek jholok porechhilam boi ki…keno?
Ami kisudin Norendropur Ramkrishno Mission e porsi kina, tohon sunsi…ei sob kotha...
Ba ba…apni to besh pondit lok, ta amar kotha shonen keno?
Apnare amar bhalo lage tai.
Amake bhalo lage, apnake ami chhini?
Na sinle ki ase?bhalo lagon zay na?
Bhalo lagte i pare, tai bole amar kotha sunte hobe?
Apner mukhta khub sondor kina, tai sarakhkhon takaye thakte ichcha kore…..
Amar sundor mukher dike takiye thakte ichche kore, kothao shunte ichche kore…….??
Zee..
Zee?ki? TV?
Angge, ami Zee dekhi na, Tara Muzik dekhi…….Shei khanei apnar gan sunsi….
Achcha apod to, Zee Tara kotha theke kothay gorachche kotha ke jane….Zee bollen keno?
Angge, Zee TV to apne koilen….
Ami Zee TV bolar age apni I Zee Zee korlen……..
Zee…
Zee Zee korben na to, osojhjho lage……..
Angge….
Apni Angge o korben na……
Apner cheye boyoshe ami onek soto kina….tai …
Boyeshe apni chhoto hoten paren, ami boro hote pari….Zee Fee bolben na…amake daken ki bole?
Angge,Moni Apu……
Apu Fapu o bolben na….Ami karur Apu na, Didi na, Bon na………..hoteo chai na..bollam na, sob I maya?
Apne sob somoy choitya thaken kyan? Kotha koyon zay na……
Chote thaki ?Ami? Sob Somoy? Ei to bollen, amar dike takaye thakte ichcha kore apnar…..
Ho, Apner much tao sundor, Apne lyakhen o somotkar , kintu Samna samni apne kyamon zani…
Samna samni ami kemon jani? Ami dekhte sundor, likhio sundor…..Hummn , apni to amay bhabalen moshai…..
Mukher kotha khan apnar sundor koron lagbo…
Ei boyeshe amake change hote bolchen? Kotha sundor bolte bolchen?Hasalen Moshai…Ki kore kori?
Apne ektu kom hasen, beshi hashle mone hoy thik hoibo…byamo ta…
Hahahaha..Apnar kotha ta sunei amar kemon hashi pachche…Ami temon hashi na bolchen?
Hasen…phuto tular somoy hasen….baki somoy gombheer…
Phuto? Oh,I see….Photo tolar somoy hashi……hahaha…..khub I hashi pachche amar…
Kyan?
Kyan ki abar?apnar kotha shune amar khub hashi pachche..Apni khub mojar lok..abar ashben.
Apner kotha ta koilen na ze?
Kotha?Ki kotha bolbo?
Shei ze koitasilen apner bondhu koise …ki zyan?
Oh, shei je amar bondhur kotha diye kotha bola surukorechhilam, seta jante chaichen?
Zee..
Tara
Sony
Ki sob baje bokchen, amakeo bokachchen…..daran bhabi…
Apne bhaben, ami apnere dekhi……..
Na, orokom haa kore amake dekhte thakle ami bhabte parbo na…
Ki korum?apne ze sundor…
Sundor sundor korben na to , birokto lage.
Apner to sobetei birokto lage…..
Moteo sobete birokto lage na…….kokhon bollam ar……?
Ektu agei to koilen, zee komu na, Agge,apne koyon zaibo na, apu dakon zaibo na, apnar birokto lage……
Hya, koisi..I mean, bolechhi , ei kotha gulo sunle birokto lage, sobetei lage bolchen keno?
Oi hoilo……
Oi hoilo mane ta ki?
Apner ekta biya koron lagbo…
Biye korte hobe amake? Keno?
Apne khub lonely…………ek khan songi dorkar.
Lonely ami na……..biye korte chaile korar o onek lok ache, kintu korbo na.
Kyan?
Kyan abar ki?korbo na, korte chain na….
Nizer loker opor biswas haraye phyalsen, tai?
Biswas harai ni…Nijer lok ta je ke, setai bujhini…
Bozhon er chesta koren nai…
Hoyto bojhar chesta korini…Ar keu chesta o koreni bojhabar………..
Kyamne korbo?Apne za bod mezazi…….
Bodmejaji?ami?Ta besh...setao manlam...Kauke temon khnuje paini..holo?
Bhalo koira khnujsen?
Hya..Khunjechhi..Bhalo kore i khnujechhi..
Na Khnojen nai...Sob kisu apne na saite i paisen..Tai dekhte paan na...
Na chaitei peyechhi...? Tai dekhte pai ni?Apni to amar sob khobor rakhen dekhchhi...
Oi ze koilam, apnere amar bhalo lage....
Laguk bhalo..apni jan to moshai, birokto lagche...
Oi dhyakhen abar apner birokto lagtase..
Achcha jala toh!!Dabi ta ki bolun to apnar?
Dabii kisu nai...Ei koitasilam apner mezaj ta ektuk chora thake sob somoy....Apnere boza daay...
Kothatar mane ki?
Mane ar kisu na, ei koi ar ki...Obhoy dile koi...
Ki je bolchhen, bujhchhi na kichu....Bolun..
Ektu bhoy kortase...
Bhoy korte hobe na, ami apnake kamrabo na...ja bolar bole phelun chotpot..
Ami koitasilam ze apnere keu koite sahosh pay na...
Sahosh pay na? Keno?
Mane apne khyar khyar koren kina....
Ami khyar khyar kori? Bodmejaji? Ja khushi tai bolchen dekhi..
Apnei to koilen koite.
Achcha, kon...taratari bolun amar kaj ache..
Taratari koyon zaibo na...
Uuff baba, ki jalaton...Sunchhi , bolun..
Shanto hoiya shunon lagbo...
Ekhon abar shanto hote hobe? Keno?
Apner mon ta oshanto boilya...Nijer kotha bhaben ektu...
Nijer kotha ki bhabbo? Biye korte hobe bolchhen?
Ho...ekjon hath dhoroner songi apner lagbo..
Bollam je keu hath dhorte chayni konodin...
Saibo kyamne? Apne za...
hcha ar bolte hobe na...etuku bujhlam, amar nijer lok amar samnei ache...Ami dekhte pachchi na...ar ami bodmejaji... mejaj dekhe, keu hath dhorte sahosh pay na...Etai apnar boktobbo?
Ho..thik koisen...
Holei ba ki?Je amake nijer mone korbe, she thik eshe hath dhorbe amar…
Ami apner hath dhorte chaile diben ki?
Hath ta dhorei dekhun age, tobei to bujhben….
….Copyright @Manidipa
Wednesday, August 17, 2011
Coming Back
Phire Asha
Bengali Short Story
By Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/18/2011
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Ranjan:Kemon Achho?
Deepa:Fast-o-celas.
Ranjan:Ek i rokom acho ekhon o?Boyosh bare na tomar?
Deepa:Ke bollo bare na? porer bochhor ‘ordho shoto barshiki’ palon korbo ami….
Ranjan:Dekhe to mone hochche na….Ekhon o teenager saj….
Deepa:Teenager !!!She to amar chelera ekhon…Ami holam bridhdha
Deepa : Ki haschho keno ?
Ranjan:Ki kore ek rokom thako tumi bolo toh?
Deepa:Tokhon theke khali amar kothai, moteo bhalo lagche na.Tomar kotha shuni.
Ranjan: Ami to chirokaler i shei dokandar…Saree kena byacha kori.
Deepa:Babah, famous designer er binoy dekho!!
Ranjan:Design to kore amar bou…Ami to just bikri r byabostha kori….
Deepa: Kagoje to dekhi tomar nam tai boro kore dey…Samir Ranjan Basu.
Ranjan:Mitali nam dite chay na.
Deepa:Otao tomar binoy….Bou er proshongsha kora ojotha.
Ranjan: Ki mushkil, ojotha keno hobe ?Sotti o anke bhalo…
Deepa :Katao….bou er golpo shonay amar interest nei….Ami bou hole onno kotha chhilo.
Ranjan :Hote to parte..hole na keno?
Deepa:Propose korechhile ?
Ranjan:Korechhilam toh….
Deepa: She to jokhon amar biye thik hobar pore…Porer din biye,uni elen tokhon!!!Kyablakanto...
Ranjan:Ki mushkil!!Ami janbo ki kore, rager mathay tumi jake take biye korbe.
Deepa:Jake take? Tomar cheye bhalo…Dokandar!!.
Ranjan:Ei to bolle designer..
Deepa:Tokhon oi dokandar i chhile...
Ranjan:Achcha jala toh….achcha besh…dokandar er preme porle ki kore?.
Deepa:Prem?Kobe?Kothay?
Ranjan:Ki mushkil,preme na porle bolchho keno propose korini.
Deepa:Koroni toh….Duniya suddu lok janto tumii amar hobu bor…tumii janle na.
Ranjan:Ki mushkil, tumi to sarakhkhon ei Sudip, noy Neil,noy Ritesh noy ki jeno si sardarji?
Deepa: Sardarji?…
Ranjan:Sei je go…gatta gotta ekta utkot lok…hindi kotha bolto….ki bolo na nam ta?
Deepa:Sammy? Sardarji hote jabe kon dukhkhe?
Ranjan:Dukhkh na, sukhei…Sammy nam chhilo?
Deepa:Janina kar kotha bolchho..Onek bondhu chhilo…
Ranjan: Hya, to onek bondhu r modhdhe, kar sathe tomar ki somporko bujhbo ki kore?
Deepa: Jiggesh korlei bole ditam……
Ranjan:Tomake jiggsesh kore thappor khetam?.
Deepa:Thappor?Kobe thappor merechhi ? Kakei ba merechhi?
Ranjan:Maroni hoyto , marte parte..
Deepa:Marte partam? Kothatar ki mane hoy?…
Ranjan: Na mane, sob somoy bolte kina, marbo tene ek chor….!!
Deepa: Tomake boltam?
Ranjan: Na..….
Deepa: kake bolechhilam tobe?
Ranjan: Oi sardarji ta ke….
Deepa: Uuuufff….oi sardarji ta ke ? .
Ranjan: Oi je mota kore kalo kore humdo moton, tomar pechhon ei bosto..
Deepa: Naveen ? tumi jano o ke ?.
Ranjan: Hobe kono smugler er byata….Dekhlei chor chor lagto.….
Deepa: Chor chor lagto? Smugler er byata? Tai ?
Ranjan: Hya, hya, ar gay bodkhot gondo…
Deepa: Tomar bishshon gulo kokhon sesh hobe?
Ranjan: Hya ja bolchhilam, sob somoy tader sathe thakte, cinemay jete…Ami tai bhoye jetam na…tomar samne….
Deepa:Pherar pothe same bus e to uthte…Jokhoni phero, tini birajoman, samne, gondomadon porbot….
Ranjan: Ki mushkil shei somoy class sesh hole ki korbo?…
Deepa: Rat egarotar pore ki class thakto jeno tomar? Dokaner phordo melabar class?
Ranjan:Egarotar pore Salt Lake ta niribili hoy jeto…Bipod porle dekhte…
Deepa: Bodyguard to chhilei tumi….Amar stoppage ei babar bondhur bari, noy ukil er sathe appointment…..Dhop master the great….
Ranjan: Ki mushkil? Kaj thakte pare na?
Deepa: Sarakhkhon ‘Ki mushkil, ki mushkil’ bolo keno kyablachoron er moton?….
Ranjan:Ki mush…..I mean, tumio to kyablachoron kyablachoron bolei jachcho.
Deepa:Bolle ki hoyeche?Kyablachoron ke ki bolbo?
Ranjan: Na…. ki ar hobe?Oti chalak er golay dori.
Deepa: Oti chalak ta ke?
Ranjan:Na…keu na…
Deepa:Keu na to kothata bolle keno?
Ranjan:Na, amader class er ekta baje meyer kotha bolchhilam
Deepa: Ki nam tar?
Ranjan:Deepsikha…
Deepa:Ki porto?….
Ranjan: Zoology…
Deepa : Koi amar class to oi name keu chhilo na…
Ranjan:Junior ….tomar cheye..o-nektai…
Deepa: Ki korechhilo ?
Ranjan: Ki abar korbe? Kichhu koreni toh..
Deepa: Oti chalaki ta ki korechhilo ?…
Ranjan : Chor merechhilo …teacher ke….tarpor take bhagiye deouya hoy….….
Deepa :Eto boro ghotona ghotlo college e, ar tumi chhara keu janlo na ?
Ranjan : Onekei janto..I mean , jane hoyto…..
Deepa: Ami chhara ?…
Ranjan: Bhule gechho…
Deepa: Bhuleo gechhi? Ganja Tanja khao naki ajkal?
Ranjan: Keno?
Deepa: Altu phaltu ki sob ja ta bokchho?
Ranjan: Ki korbo? Tomar sathe kotha bolte kemon bhoy kore.
Deepa:Haa kore college e takiye thakte bhoy korto na?
Ranjan: Haa kore? Ami? Hottei pare na.
Deepa: Na hole ara-ari boste keno?.
Ranjan: Board dekhar jonno….
Deepa: Board er onko tukte na bole roj tumi na bokuni khete?
Ranjan: Achcha, asha theke pulish er jera korchho keno boloto?.
Deepa: Sotti kotha bolte parona keno?
Ranjan:Sotti kotha ta ki?
Deepa: Ei je tumi amay bhalobasho…
Ranjan: Bhalo talo bashi na….
Deepa: Tahol kauke biye korle na keno?.
Ranjan: Ke bollo biye korini?
Deepa: Marbo tene ek chor…Abar miththe kotha?
Ranjan:Ki mushkil, abar dhomkachcho!!
Deepa:Ar ekbar ‘ki mushkil’ bolechho ki gola tipe marbo…….
Ranjan:Gola tiple to bhaloi, hater chonya to pabo….
Deepa: Hather chonya pabar etoi ichcha jokhon, tokhon she chesta nei keno?.
Ranjan:Ar ekhon chesta korei ba labh ki?
Deepa: Ke bollo labh nei?
Ranjan: Humdo sardarji ki chhere debe?
Deepa: Naveen, Can u come here? Ei je Naveen, er kothai bolchhile? Humdo Sardarji ?
Ranjan: Oh ‘Hi’…Mane…hya..mane na..Ag bolbe to , ekhanei ache….
Deepa: O to sarakhkhon i amadr sathei chhilo..Ami to or sathi esechhi….
Ranjan: Bangla bojhe ?
Deepa: Kolkatar chhele bangla bujhbe na?
Ranjan: Ami thik or kotha bolini….
Deepa: kar kotha bolchhile?
Ranjan: Shei Naveen er kotha bolechhilam.
Deepa: E ii shei Naveen….
Ranjan: Jar sathe tomar biye hoyechhilo?
Deepa: Hobar kotha chhilo, hoy ni…
Ranjan: Hoy ni?Kar sathe hoyechhilo tobe?
Deepa: Karur sathei na…
Ranjan: Jah ,baje kotha…
Deepa: Naveen kei jiggasha koro…
Ranjan: Naveen to muchki muchki hashe ar matha nare…Ki mushkil….Aaah…mukhe hath chapa dao keno…?
Deepa:Bolechhi na , ar ekbar bollei…gola tipe marbo….
Ranjan: Ta sorale keno?Hater chnoya ta to bhaloi lagchhilo…..
Deepa: Etoi jokhon bhalo lage tokhon ……
Ranjan: Tokhon to chole ditei hoy….Ashar hole she ashei phire, tai na?
Deepa: Etoi confidence ?
Ranjan :Confidence na…..Sahosh kore tomar biyer ager din prostab dilam…Galmondo kore bhagiy dile….Bolle biye korbe kal i…ami tokhon..
Deepa : Bibagi hoye gele?
Ranjan : Khanik ta tai…Train chepe Bombay chhole elam…
Deepa: Ar ami bochhor er por bochhor ha pittesh kore boshei roilam.
Ranjan: Chokhe jol keno paglir?
Deepa: Ekdom oi name dakbe na….…..
Ranjan: Ki Mush…ki…Achcha baba achcha…..Ar bolbo na…Areh, Naveen ta kothay gelo?
Deepa: Oke chole jete dao, Ranjan….…..
………..Copyright @Manidipa
Bengali Short Story
By Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/18/2011
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Ranjan:Kemon Achho?
Deepa:Fast-o-celas.
Ranjan:Ek i rokom acho ekhon o?Boyosh bare na tomar?
Deepa:Ke bollo bare na? porer bochhor ‘ordho shoto barshiki’ palon korbo ami….
Ranjan:Dekhe to mone hochche na….Ekhon o teenager saj….
Deepa:Teenager !!!She to amar chelera ekhon…Ami holam bridhdha
Deepa : Ki haschho keno ?
Ranjan:Ki kore ek rokom thako tumi bolo toh?
Deepa:Tokhon theke khali amar kothai, moteo bhalo lagche na.Tomar kotha shuni.
Ranjan: Ami to chirokaler i shei dokandar…Saree kena byacha kori.
Deepa:Babah, famous designer er binoy dekho!!
Ranjan:Design to kore amar bou…Ami to just bikri r byabostha kori….
Deepa: Kagoje to dekhi tomar nam tai boro kore dey…Samir Ranjan Basu.
Ranjan:Mitali nam dite chay na.
Deepa:Otao tomar binoy….Bou er proshongsha kora ojotha.
Ranjan: Ki mushkil, ojotha keno hobe ?Sotti o anke bhalo…
Deepa :Katao….bou er golpo shonay amar interest nei….Ami bou hole onno kotha chhilo.
Ranjan :Hote to parte..hole na keno?
Deepa:Propose korechhile ?
Ranjan:Korechhilam toh….
Deepa: She to jokhon amar biye thik hobar pore…Porer din biye,uni elen tokhon!!!Kyablakanto...
Ranjan:Ki mushkil!!Ami janbo ki kore, rager mathay tumi jake take biye korbe.
Deepa:Jake take? Tomar cheye bhalo…Dokandar!!.
Ranjan:Ei to bolle designer..
Deepa:Tokhon oi dokandar i chhile...
Ranjan:Achcha jala toh….achcha besh…dokandar er preme porle ki kore?.
Deepa:Prem?Kobe?Kothay?
Ranjan:Ki mushkil,preme na porle bolchho keno propose korini.
Deepa:Koroni toh….Duniya suddu lok janto tumii amar hobu bor…tumii janle na.
Ranjan:Ki mushkil, tumi to sarakhkhon ei Sudip, noy Neil,noy Ritesh noy ki jeno si sardarji?
Deepa: Sardarji?…
Ranjan:Sei je go…gatta gotta ekta utkot lok…hindi kotha bolto….ki bolo na nam ta?
Deepa:Sammy? Sardarji hote jabe kon dukhkhe?
Ranjan:Dukhkh na, sukhei…Sammy nam chhilo?
Deepa:Janina kar kotha bolchho..Onek bondhu chhilo…
Ranjan: Hya, to onek bondhu r modhdhe, kar sathe tomar ki somporko bujhbo ki kore?
Deepa: Jiggesh korlei bole ditam……
Ranjan:Tomake jiggsesh kore thappor khetam?.
Deepa:Thappor?Kobe thappor merechhi ? Kakei ba merechhi?
Ranjan:Maroni hoyto , marte parte..
Deepa:Marte partam? Kothatar ki mane hoy?…
Ranjan: Na mane, sob somoy bolte kina, marbo tene ek chor….!!
Deepa: Tomake boltam?
Ranjan: Na..….
Deepa: kake bolechhilam tobe?
Ranjan: Oi sardarji ta ke….
Deepa: Uuuufff….oi sardarji ta ke ? .
Ranjan: Oi je mota kore kalo kore humdo moton, tomar pechhon ei bosto..
Deepa: Naveen ? tumi jano o ke ?.
Ranjan: Hobe kono smugler er byata….Dekhlei chor chor lagto.….
Deepa: Chor chor lagto? Smugler er byata? Tai ?
Ranjan: Hya, hya, ar gay bodkhot gondo…
Deepa: Tomar bishshon gulo kokhon sesh hobe?
Ranjan: Hya ja bolchhilam, sob somoy tader sathe thakte, cinemay jete…Ami tai bhoye jetam na…tomar samne….
Deepa:Pherar pothe same bus e to uthte…Jokhoni phero, tini birajoman, samne, gondomadon porbot….
Ranjan: Ki mushkil shei somoy class sesh hole ki korbo?…
Deepa: Rat egarotar pore ki class thakto jeno tomar? Dokaner phordo melabar class?
Ranjan:Egarotar pore Salt Lake ta niribili hoy jeto…Bipod porle dekhte…
Deepa: Bodyguard to chhilei tumi….Amar stoppage ei babar bondhur bari, noy ukil er sathe appointment…..Dhop master the great….
Ranjan: Ki mushkil? Kaj thakte pare na?
Deepa: Sarakhkhon ‘Ki mushkil, ki mushkil’ bolo keno kyablachoron er moton?….
Ranjan:Ki mush…..I mean, tumio to kyablachoron kyablachoron bolei jachcho.
Deepa:Bolle ki hoyeche?Kyablachoron ke ki bolbo?
Ranjan: Na…. ki ar hobe?Oti chalak er golay dori.
Deepa: Oti chalak ta ke?
Ranjan:Na…keu na…
Deepa:Keu na to kothata bolle keno?
Ranjan:Na, amader class er ekta baje meyer kotha bolchhilam
Deepa: Ki nam tar?
Ranjan:Deepsikha…
Deepa:Ki porto?….
Ranjan: Zoology…
Deepa : Koi amar class to oi name keu chhilo na…
Ranjan:Junior ….tomar cheye..o-nektai…
Deepa: Ki korechhilo ?
Ranjan: Ki abar korbe? Kichhu koreni toh..
Deepa: Oti chalaki ta ki korechhilo ?…
Ranjan : Chor merechhilo …teacher ke….tarpor take bhagiye deouya hoy….….
Deepa :Eto boro ghotona ghotlo college e, ar tumi chhara keu janlo na ?
Ranjan : Onekei janto..I mean , jane hoyto…..
Deepa: Ami chhara ?…
Ranjan: Bhule gechho…
Deepa: Bhuleo gechhi? Ganja Tanja khao naki ajkal?
Ranjan: Keno?
Deepa: Altu phaltu ki sob ja ta bokchho?
Ranjan: Ki korbo? Tomar sathe kotha bolte kemon bhoy kore.
Deepa:Haa kore college e takiye thakte bhoy korto na?
Ranjan: Haa kore? Ami? Hottei pare na.
Deepa: Na hole ara-ari boste keno?.
Ranjan: Board dekhar jonno….
Deepa: Board er onko tukte na bole roj tumi na bokuni khete?
Ranjan: Achcha, asha theke pulish er jera korchho keno boloto?.
Deepa: Sotti kotha bolte parona keno?
Ranjan:Sotti kotha ta ki?
Deepa: Ei je tumi amay bhalobasho…
Ranjan: Bhalo talo bashi na….
Deepa: Tahol kauke biye korle na keno?.
Ranjan: Ke bollo biye korini?
Deepa: Marbo tene ek chor…Abar miththe kotha?
Ranjan:Ki mushkil, abar dhomkachcho!!
Deepa:Ar ekbar ‘ki mushkil’ bolechho ki gola tipe marbo…….
Ranjan:Gola tiple to bhaloi, hater chonya to pabo….
Deepa: Hather chonya pabar etoi ichcha jokhon, tokhon she chesta nei keno?.
Ranjan:Ar ekhon chesta korei ba labh ki?
Deepa: Ke bollo labh nei?
Ranjan: Humdo sardarji ki chhere debe?
Deepa: Naveen, Can u come here? Ei je Naveen, er kothai bolchhile? Humdo Sardarji ?
Ranjan: Oh ‘Hi’…Mane…hya..mane na..Ag bolbe to , ekhanei ache….
Deepa: O to sarakhkhon i amadr sathei chhilo..Ami to or sathi esechhi….
Ranjan: Bangla bojhe ?
Deepa: Kolkatar chhele bangla bujhbe na?
Ranjan: Ami thik or kotha bolini….
Deepa: kar kotha bolchhile?
Ranjan: Shei Naveen er kotha bolechhilam.
Deepa: E ii shei Naveen….
Ranjan: Jar sathe tomar biye hoyechhilo?
Deepa: Hobar kotha chhilo, hoy ni…
Ranjan: Hoy ni?Kar sathe hoyechhilo tobe?
Deepa: Karur sathei na…
Ranjan: Jah ,baje kotha…
Deepa: Naveen kei jiggasha koro…
Ranjan: Naveen to muchki muchki hashe ar matha nare…Ki mushkil….Aaah…mukhe hath chapa dao keno…?
Deepa:Bolechhi na , ar ekbar bollei…gola tipe marbo….
Ranjan: Ta sorale keno?Hater chnoya ta to bhaloi lagchhilo…..
Deepa: Etoi jokhon bhalo lage tokhon ……
Ranjan: Tokhon to chole ditei hoy….Ashar hole she ashei phire, tai na?
Deepa: Etoi confidence ?
Ranjan :Confidence na…..Sahosh kore tomar biyer ager din prostab dilam…Galmondo kore bhagiy dile….Bolle biye korbe kal i…ami tokhon..
Deepa : Bibagi hoye gele?
Ranjan : Khanik ta tai…Train chepe Bombay chhole elam…
Deepa: Ar ami bochhor er por bochhor ha pittesh kore boshei roilam.
Ranjan: Chokhe jol keno paglir?
Deepa: Ekdom oi name dakbe na….…..
Ranjan: Ki Mush…ki…Achcha baba achcha…..Ar bolbo na…Areh, Naveen ta kothay gelo?
Deepa: Oke chole jete dao, Ranjan….…..
………..Copyright @Manidipa
Monday, August 8, 2011
Missing Something?
Moner Bhul?
Bengali Short Story by Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/8/2011
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‘Ki re , sunlam naki khub jor jor hoyeche, office jashni naki dudin?’
‘Tui janli ki kore?’
‘Facebook e proti second ei to update dish…kokhon bhath kheli, macher dam koto, ki diye bhath makhli…’
‘Dei to besh kori, tui I ba haa kore amar kotha gulo porish keno?’
‘Kauke to portei hobe, likhchish eto kosto kore!’
‘Tor jonno to likhchhi na….tui thakna tor bou er anchol dhore..’
‘ki mushkil, abar bou ke niye tanatani keno abar?’
‘tanatani keu koreni, tor moton joru ka gulam der onno mohilar facebook pora uchit na bolei mone kori..’
‘ta, bou thakle, anchol to dhortei hobe, tor ekhon bor toke chhere paliyeche..,tate amar ki dosh…’
‘ami I chhherechhi, amake chere palayni…..karon tao tui janish..’
‘oi ek I holo….ta golpo folpo likhchish na…dhoper golpo jodio…’
‘Dhoper golpo Jodi, tahole porish keno haaa kore?’
‘Koi na toh!’
‘ki , koi natoh?’
‘Haa kore pori na toh…,mukh bondho korei pori’
‘Thakte to parish na amake chhere..biye korar somoy palali keno?’
‘Biye?Toke?Bapre…..jhogra kore kobe sorge pathiye ditish tui..’
‘oh, ar tor bou?jhogra korena, tai na?’
‘ei meye guloi, mairi bolchhi, bohut jhogrute hoy….sotti bolchhi..’
‘ahha…bou ke phele ,majh ratre, onno bandhobir sathe chat korbi, ar bou jhogra korbe na!!!ki abdar..’
‘Dekh bhaggish tui amar bou nosh..’
‘keno, tate ki…?’
‘Toke phele ar ekjoner sathe chat kortam….tui kya kya kortish..seta ki bhalo hoto?’
‘bah…besh besh…ki jukti….ei chheleguloi omon…’
‘kemon?’
‘sarakhkhon, onno meyeder pechone chhonk chhonk..’
‘Chhonk chhonk kora kharap kise?’
‘khub bhalo….ne tui chonk chhonk korei mor…ami gelam…’
‘ei shon na, shon na….ki gan record korli bolbi na?’
‘na…toke bolbo keno? Tui ke, je sob kotha bolbo?’
‘tor I pet phule dhol hobe….amar ki?’
‘tor onek kicchhui….mukh phute ekdin bolei phyal….dekhbi tor pet I halka hobe..’
‘shei ashay I boshe thak..’
‘boshe I to achhi…ekdin na ekdin to bolbi i’
‘ja bhag….office ja…..kaj kommo kichhu nei…baje bhatano..’
‘ha ha…..sotti kotha sune rag holo?
‘rag fag hoyni…ja kat….amar onno bandhobi dakadaki korchhe..’
‘tui mor…’
Bolei chat session ta off kore dilo Titir….Roj I pray ek I kothopokothon
chhole Debu r sathe…..
Nah sotti office e deri hoye jachche.Ekhkhuni Vineet eshe jabe office e jabar jonno pickup korte.
Baki golpota Vineet er sathei hoy, garite jete jete….
Vineet o mon diye or ar Debur golpo gulo shone.
Vineet ar Titir ek I office e kaj kore, barir kachei thake bole dujone eksathei jay office e.
Tate subidhe onek...office er ek ghontar journey tao oto boring hoyna…Ar Titir er bok bok shonar o ekta lok paoya jay…
Majhe majhe Debu ke khyapanor jonno, Vineet er golpo kore Debu r kache…Kintu dekheche, Debu ekdom I patta dey na….Emon ki Vineet ke ?kemon dekhte, she bishoy eo jante chayna….
Tate ektu rag I hoy Titir er….Debu ektu jealous hole hoyto bhalo lagto….
‘kintu keno?’
‘kkki keno?’
Vineet er proshne chhomke gelo Titir….
‘Bolchhilam, eto chinta keno?Asha theke, no’ hi’, no ‘hello’?what’s wrong’…Vineet jiggesh korlo.
‘Oh sorry….na ei Debu r pindi chotkachchilam mone mone..’
‘pindi, what?’
‘Oh ho..Vineet?chhotobela theke Kolkatay thekeo Bangla sikhle na tumi?’
Titir Bollo Vineet ke.
‘oto kothin word bujhte pari na….normal kotha is okay..’ Vineet justify korar chesta korlo…
‘Tomar bou ekhon kemon ache Vineet?’ Titir kotha ghorabar chesta korlo.
‘Oi ek I rokom.Sarakhkhon pete byatha byatha bole.Doctor kichhu dhorte parchhe na..’
‘Achcha, sob bhalo chhelerai married keno bolo toh..?’Titir hothath jiggesh korlo.
‘Ha, ha…this is really funny…u r a crazy woman..’VINEET HASHLO GARI CHALATE CHALATE.
‘my name is Sheila….Sheila ki jawani..I am too sexy for u..teri hath na ani.’Titir gan dhorlo CD r sathe sathe…
‘have u ever thought of going to a Doctor?’Vineet or kando dekhe jiggesh korlo.
‘Doctor?keno?ki hoyeche?’ Titir gan thamiye jiggesh korlo.
‘matha r treatment korate…’’Vineet or dike taiye bollo..
‘Samne takan Dada……..gari dhakka lagbe …!!’Titir steering e hath rakhte
gelo.
‘pashe beautiful lady boshe thakle na takale chole?’ Vineet hese bollo…
‘Tao bhalo ekjon atleast beautiful bollo..’ Titir hashlo…
‘Come on! I bet onek chelei boleche tomake bhalo dekhte…’Vineet bollo…
‘Chheleder theke meyerai boleche beshi…oboshsho meyera sotti kotha bole na..’Titir gombhir mukhe bollo.
‘T, u are very funny…U know that?’Vineet Titir ke T bolei dake…
‘Yes V,u tell me that all the time…..Cholo ebare office e kaj kori…’Bolei Titir office er parking lot e namlo….
Sare nota bajlo pray..Ekhkhuni Debu r phone ashbe.
Roj esomoy ekta phone kore khonj nebe, Titir office e pouchalo kina.
Majhe majhe birokto lage Titir er….Etoi Jodi chinta tahole biyeta korli na keno Debu?
Debu o USA te Titir er sathei ek office ei kaj korto.Debu o single chhilo..
Titir er divorce tokhon o hoyni.
Titir ar Debu r somporko niye tokhon bangaleeder modhdhe roshalo golpo cholto.
Ei niyei bor er sathe bonibona suru…tarpor jhogra.
Dhidhagrostho hoye Titir seshe bari chhere beriye ashe….
Tarpore to divorce hoye jay….
Debu r jonnoi practically Titir divorce ta korlo, jodio Debu oke korte boleni…
Bondhutter beshi dabi I konodin Debu koreni…
Tao Titir bhebechhilo Debu hoyto oke bhalobashe, biye korte chay….
Divorce er por bohubar boleche biye korar kotha…kichhutei raji hoyni Debu.
Khali bolto Bondhu achi, bondhui thaki na?
Hothath I ekdin dum kore sob chhere chhure deshe chhole gelo Debu.
Giyei sunlo ekjon ke biye korechhe Debu…
Rage Dukhkhe Opomane bohudin Debur sathe jogajog rakheni Titir.
Khali mone hoto Debu oke cheat korechhe…
Vineet I oke bujhiyechhilo ete Debu r kono dosh nei…Debu to oke boleni biye korbe bole….Tai kono expectation rakha uchhit hoyni Titir er.
Shei chorom dukhkher dine pashe peyechhilo Vineet ke…O na thakle hoyto Titir suicide er kotha bhabto.
Ashole Debu r rejection ta Titir mante parchhilo na.
Prochondo opoman…tar theke Raag…er theke berote parchhilo na Titir….
Mone ache, roj office jaouya ashar pothe chitkar kore kandto Titir…
Bechara Vineet, shanto mukhe eshob sojhjho koreche….
Kintu kokhon o Debu r agsinst e ekta kothao boleni….khali bole geche dekho or hoyto kichhu osubidhe chhilo.
Tokhon or Vineet er oporeo rag hoto….aste aste somoy sob kichhu bhuliye dey…
Vineet I abar Debu r sathe Titir er sathe jogajog koriye dey thru facebook.
Majhe majhe Titir bhabe, Vineet I ba eto kichhu kore keno or jonno?
Tobe ki Vineet oke bhalobashe?
Vineet er oboshsho bou ache..bohudin bibahito…
Shailaja, or bou, oke school theke bhalobasto.
Engineering pash korei Vineet Shailaja ke biye kore USA te chole ashe….
Shailaja meyeta bhalo kintu khub bhoge….Sarakhkhon I kichhu na kichhu osukh legei ache.
Khub boroloker meye Shailaja….pray I deshe chole jay..noyto or barir keu na keu ashei…
Golpo sune mone hoy Vineet is not happy in his marriage, kintu ar oi guessing game e jete chayna Titir.
Debu r dhakka samlate onek beg pete hoyeche…
Abar Vineet er sathe joriye porte chay na….
Oboshsho Vineet serokom kichhu boleni Titir ke, hint o deyni…….
Sobtai ki Titir er moner bhul?
Debu r phone ashlo na dekhe Titir er bhuru konchkalo…
Ki byapar, phone korena keno? Phone kore dekhbe?
Na thak, Debu bou Jodi jante pare, seta khub ekta bhalo byapar hobe na…..
Debu r bou ke dekhar khub ichche Titir er…….keno Titir ke biye na kore Debu oke biye korlo, Titir er jante ichche kore…….Ki nei Titir er ja oi meyetar ache?
Ekhon ar rag hoyna Debu r opor.
Jante ichche kore , ‘Kemon achho tumi Debu?’
Bhabte bhabte Debu r text…’Office e pouchali kina ekta email kore dish…na hole chintay thakbo…..’
‘Tui mor…..’likhe text er window ta bonndho kore dilo Titir…..
………Copyright @Manidipa
Bengali Short Story by Manidipa Bhattacharya
8/8/2011
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‘Ki re , sunlam naki khub jor jor hoyeche, office jashni naki dudin?’
‘Tui janli ki kore?’
‘Facebook e proti second ei to update dish…kokhon bhath kheli, macher dam koto, ki diye bhath makhli…’
‘Dei to besh kori, tui I ba haa kore amar kotha gulo porish keno?’
‘Kauke to portei hobe, likhchish eto kosto kore!’
‘Tor jonno to likhchhi na….tui thakna tor bou er anchol dhore..’
‘ki mushkil, abar bou ke niye tanatani keno abar?’
‘tanatani keu koreni, tor moton joru ka gulam der onno mohilar facebook pora uchit na bolei mone kori..’
‘ta, bou thakle, anchol to dhortei hobe, tor ekhon bor toke chhere paliyeche..,tate amar ki dosh…’
‘ami I chhherechhi, amake chere palayni…..karon tao tui janish..’
‘oi ek I holo….ta golpo folpo likhchish na…dhoper golpo jodio…’
‘Dhoper golpo Jodi, tahole porish keno haaa kore?’
‘Koi na toh!’
‘ki , koi natoh?’
‘Haa kore pori na toh…,mukh bondho korei pori’
‘Thakte to parish na amake chhere..biye korar somoy palali keno?’
‘Biye?Toke?Bapre…..jhogra kore kobe sorge pathiye ditish tui..’
‘oh, ar tor bou?jhogra korena, tai na?’
‘ei meye guloi, mairi bolchhi, bohut jhogrute hoy….sotti bolchhi..’
‘ahha…bou ke phele ,majh ratre, onno bandhobir sathe chat korbi, ar bou jhogra korbe na!!!ki abdar..’
‘Dekh bhaggish tui amar bou nosh..’
‘keno, tate ki…?’
‘Toke phele ar ekjoner sathe chat kortam….tui kya kya kortish..seta ki bhalo hoto?’
‘bah…besh besh…ki jukti….ei chheleguloi omon…’
‘kemon?’
‘sarakhkhon, onno meyeder pechone chhonk chhonk..’
‘Chhonk chhonk kora kharap kise?’
‘khub bhalo….ne tui chonk chhonk korei mor…ami gelam…’
‘ei shon na, shon na….ki gan record korli bolbi na?’
‘na…toke bolbo keno? Tui ke, je sob kotha bolbo?’
‘tor I pet phule dhol hobe….amar ki?’
‘tor onek kicchhui….mukh phute ekdin bolei phyal….dekhbi tor pet I halka hobe..’
‘shei ashay I boshe thak..’
‘boshe I to achhi…ekdin na ekdin to bolbi i’
‘ja bhag….office ja…..kaj kommo kichhu nei…baje bhatano..’
‘ha ha…..sotti kotha sune rag holo?
‘rag fag hoyni…ja kat….amar onno bandhobi dakadaki korchhe..’
‘tui mor…’
Bolei chat session ta off kore dilo Titir….Roj I pray ek I kothopokothon
chhole Debu r sathe…..
Nah sotti office e deri hoye jachche.Ekhkhuni Vineet eshe jabe office e jabar jonno pickup korte.
Baki golpota Vineet er sathei hoy, garite jete jete….
Vineet o mon diye or ar Debur golpo gulo shone.
Vineet ar Titir ek I office e kaj kore, barir kachei thake bole dujone eksathei jay office e.
Tate subidhe onek...office er ek ghontar journey tao oto boring hoyna…Ar Titir er bok bok shonar o ekta lok paoya jay…
Majhe majhe Debu ke khyapanor jonno, Vineet er golpo kore Debu r kache…Kintu dekheche, Debu ekdom I patta dey na….Emon ki Vineet ke ?kemon dekhte, she bishoy eo jante chayna….
Tate ektu rag I hoy Titir er….Debu ektu jealous hole hoyto bhalo lagto….
‘kintu keno?’
‘kkki keno?’
Vineet er proshne chhomke gelo Titir….
‘Bolchhilam, eto chinta keno?Asha theke, no’ hi’, no ‘hello’?what’s wrong’…Vineet jiggesh korlo.
‘Oh sorry….na ei Debu r pindi chotkachchilam mone mone..’
‘pindi, what?’
‘Oh ho..Vineet?chhotobela theke Kolkatay thekeo Bangla sikhle na tumi?’
Titir Bollo Vineet ke.
‘oto kothin word bujhte pari na….normal kotha is okay..’ Vineet justify korar chesta korlo…
‘Tomar bou ekhon kemon ache Vineet?’ Titir kotha ghorabar chesta korlo.
‘Oi ek I rokom.Sarakhkhon pete byatha byatha bole.Doctor kichhu dhorte parchhe na..’
‘Achcha, sob bhalo chhelerai married keno bolo toh..?’Titir hothath jiggesh korlo.
‘Ha, ha…this is really funny…u r a crazy woman..’VINEET HASHLO GARI CHALATE CHALATE.
‘my name is Sheila….Sheila ki jawani..I am too sexy for u..teri hath na ani.’Titir gan dhorlo CD r sathe sathe…
‘have u ever thought of going to a Doctor?’Vineet or kando dekhe jiggesh korlo.
‘Doctor?keno?ki hoyeche?’ Titir gan thamiye jiggesh korlo.
‘matha r treatment korate…’’Vineet or dike taiye bollo..
‘Samne takan Dada……..gari dhakka lagbe …!!’Titir steering e hath rakhte
gelo.
‘pashe beautiful lady boshe thakle na takale chole?’ Vineet hese bollo…
‘Tao bhalo ekjon atleast beautiful bollo..’ Titir hashlo…
‘Come on! I bet onek chelei boleche tomake bhalo dekhte…’Vineet bollo…
‘Chheleder theke meyerai boleche beshi…oboshsho meyera sotti kotha bole na..’Titir gombhir mukhe bollo.
‘T, u are very funny…U know that?’Vineet Titir ke T bolei dake…
‘Yes V,u tell me that all the time…..Cholo ebare office e kaj kori…’Bolei Titir office er parking lot e namlo….
Sare nota bajlo pray..Ekhkhuni Debu r phone ashbe.
Roj esomoy ekta phone kore khonj nebe, Titir office e pouchalo kina.
Majhe majhe birokto lage Titir er….Etoi Jodi chinta tahole biyeta korli na keno Debu?
Debu o USA te Titir er sathei ek office ei kaj korto.Debu o single chhilo..
Titir er divorce tokhon o hoyni.
Titir ar Debu r somporko niye tokhon bangaleeder modhdhe roshalo golpo cholto.
Ei niyei bor er sathe bonibona suru…tarpor jhogra.
Dhidhagrostho hoye Titir seshe bari chhere beriye ashe….
Tarpore to divorce hoye jay….
Debu r jonnoi practically Titir divorce ta korlo, jodio Debu oke korte boleni…
Bondhutter beshi dabi I konodin Debu koreni…
Tao Titir bhebechhilo Debu hoyto oke bhalobashe, biye korte chay….
Divorce er por bohubar boleche biye korar kotha…kichhutei raji hoyni Debu.
Khali bolto Bondhu achi, bondhui thaki na?
Hothath I ekdin dum kore sob chhere chhure deshe chhole gelo Debu.
Giyei sunlo ekjon ke biye korechhe Debu…
Rage Dukhkhe Opomane bohudin Debur sathe jogajog rakheni Titir.
Khali mone hoto Debu oke cheat korechhe…
Vineet I oke bujhiyechhilo ete Debu r kono dosh nei…Debu to oke boleni biye korbe bole….Tai kono expectation rakha uchhit hoyni Titir er.
Shei chorom dukhkher dine pashe peyechhilo Vineet ke…O na thakle hoyto Titir suicide er kotha bhabto.
Ashole Debu r rejection ta Titir mante parchhilo na.
Prochondo opoman…tar theke Raag…er theke berote parchhilo na Titir….
Mone ache, roj office jaouya ashar pothe chitkar kore kandto Titir…
Bechara Vineet, shanto mukhe eshob sojhjho koreche….
Kintu kokhon o Debu r agsinst e ekta kothao boleni….khali bole geche dekho or hoyto kichhu osubidhe chhilo.
Tokhon or Vineet er oporeo rag hoto….aste aste somoy sob kichhu bhuliye dey…
Vineet I abar Debu r sathe Titir er sathe jogajog koriye dey thru facebook.
Majhe majhe Titir bhabe, Vineet I ba eto kichhu kore keno or jonno?
Tobe ki Vineet oke bhalobashe?
Vineet er oboshsho bou ache..bohudin bibahito…
Shailaja, or bou, oke school theke bhalobasto.
Engineering pash korei Vineet Shailaja ke biye kore USA te chole ashe….
Shailaja meyeta bhalo kintu khub bhoge….Sarakhkhon I kichhu na kichhu osukh legei ache.
Khub boroloker meye Shailaja….pray I deshe chole jay..noyto or barir keu na keu ashei…
Golpo sune mone hoy Vineet is not happy in his marriage, kintu ar oi guessing game e jete chayna Titir.
Debu r dhakka samlate onek beg pete hoyeche…
Abar Vineet er sathe joriye porte chay na….
Oboshsho Vineet serokom kichhu boleni Titir ke, hint o deyni…….
Sobtai ki Titir er moner bhul?
Debu r phone ashlo na dekhe Titir er bhuru konchkalo…
Ki byapar, phone korena keno? Phone kore dekhbe?
Na thak, Debu bou Jodi jante pare, seta khub ekta bhalo byapar hobe na…..
Debu r bou ke dekhar khub ichche Titir er…….keno Titir ke biye na kore Debu oke biye korlo, Titir er jante ichche kore…….Ki nei Titir er ja oi meyetar ache?
Ekhon ar rag hoyna Debu r opor.
Jante ichche kore , ‘Kemon achho tumi Debu?’
Bhabte bhabte Debu r text…’Office e pouchali kina ekta email kore dish…na hole chintay thakbo…..’
‘Tui mor…..’likhe text er window ta bonndho kore dilo Titir…..
………Copyright @Manidipa
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