Monday, March 12, 2012

Eight Fifty Bus

Atta Ponchash er Bus ta
Benglai short Story
By Manidipa Bhattacharya
3/12/2012
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'Ei shono na chholona kothao berate jai?'
'Kono dorkar nei...Pitla sokh'
'Keno ek bar o ki kothao jete parina?'
'Na, jeta parina byas parina,Further sunte chai na'
'Ki paro tumi?Dosh bochhore ekbar o kothao niyegele na, Kajer kaj to kichhui parona'
'Boshe achho keno? Chole jetei paro'
'Parii to..Golar kanta ber korte parbo jedin,sedin i berobo'
'Berole berobe, ami deke anbo se asha koro na'
'Asha korbo tomar kache?Ekta goyna, valentine e phul, jonmodine card.....asha onek i korechhi etokal...kichhu peyechhi?
'Jao na, je chhele tomar jonno Valentines day te phul niye boshe thakbe tar kache jao'
'Du taka to phuler dam, seta te tenar poisa nosto..tar bodole gada taka khoroch kore amar cell phone na dileo chholto..'
'Phone to du bochor use korte parbe, phul to ek din porei sukiye jay.'
'Ekdin holeo ghotona ta mone rakhtam...ektao to mone rakhar moto ghotona nei amader'
'Age to onek phul, card diyechhi, segulo mone rekhechho? Rakhoni..Khamokha opatre diye labh ki?'
'Hya ami to opatro?Patri ta ke suni?Shei lal salwar pora mohila ti, jar sathe ghontar por ghonta adda chhole?
'Tumi abar ,jhogra chhara kotha bolo naki ?
'Ar bakira?Tenara ki modhur bani shonan naki?'
'Tomar jene labh?Tomar bus er soho jatri r sathe kotha bollei paro...Sokal atta tei jar phone ashe.'
'Sokal attay phone ashe, bus dhorbo kina jante...Tomar to saradin sararat i phone baje
'Ami to korina'
'Kotha to bolo dekhi ghontar por ghonta...'
'Keu kotha bolle bolbo na keno?'
'Dine hazar ta phone keno ashe, amar bonjhir dubochhorer bachchao bole debe.
'Tomar bonjhir bachchao nischhoy tomar motoi kutil...tai..'
'Ami kutil?Ar tumi?dhouya tulshi pata?'
'Ami to kharap i, ami to bolini ami dhouya na adhoya tulshi'
'Disgusting!tomar sathe thaka jay na'
'Theko na, bolini to thakte.'
'Berobar opekhhay thako, tai na?Jate a ekjon dhukte pare'
'Karur sathe korar kichu ichche thakle,lukiyei kora jete pare'
'Tai koro,Korechho o bodhhoy.....Amar samnei jokhon eto prem, Arale na jani ki chole rashleela'
'Ja bhabte chao,bhabtei paro..extreme level e mathar gondogol'
'Hya,ta to botei,mathar gondogol na hole ar tomar case ta dar korabe ki bhabe?'
'Oh, er modhdhe abar case o chole elo? Bah chomotkar'
'Hya, ashbei to...Tole tole plan chholche bodhhoy..'
'Kato to ebar,onek sunechhi, boro boro boktobbo.......'
'Tahole i to tomar subidhe, joto mukh bondho rakhbo.'
'Stupid er moto kotha gulo sunte hoyna tahole'
'Shunte hobe na, thako eka eka...'

Dum dam ghor theke beriye giye onno ghore doram kore dorja bondho korlo Pritha.
Rojkar er ei kothopokothon chhole Rajat er sathe.
Sesh hoy doram kore dorja bondho diye...

Rage ga gir gir kore jolchhe Prithar.
Rajat ar Prithar durotto kromei bere jachche Pritha bujhte parche.
Chesta kore biyeta tikiye rakhar, kintu kichhutei hochchena.
Ei kotha shei kothar seshe sei ek i porinoti ghote.
Ki je kora uchhit, Pritha bojhe na.
Kuke bolteo parena e kotha.
Barite bolle, babar pressure bere jabe.
Mar kanna suru hobe.
Didi bolbe, 'besh hoyeche, bolechhilam na korte oi chheletake biye korte.'
Barir sobar omote i ekprokar jor korei biye korechhilo Pritha Rajat ke.
Womaniser bole Rajat er ekta bodnam chhilo college e..
Jokhon ora prem korto college e, barir sobai janto se kotha.
Bhai oke bibhinno somoy bibhinno meyer sathe dekheche bolto eshe barite.
Bondhu bandhob sobai bolechhilo, 'Ei biye ta korish na Pritha.'
Toder mentality alada.
Echara Rajat songsar korar moton chhele i na.

Pritha o jed kore biye korlo Rajat ke.
Infact Rajat er o ichche chhilona biyete.
O nijei bolto ami kintu  marriage material na....Amake biye kore kono labh nei tomar.
Kintu chhokher jol, emotional blackmail kore motmat Rajat ke raji koriyeichhilo.
Labh je kichhu hoyni, dosh bochore Pritha bujheche ekhon.

Tokhon mone hoyechhilo, Rajat ke na pele banchai jabe na.
Ekhon mone hoy, tarahuro na korlei hoto.

Office er chhele bondhura kingba sokal aat ta ponchash er bus er sohojatri bondhuti ke besh bhaloi lage.
poytrish minute er bus er journey te sara bochorer jomano sukh dukhkher kotha share kore Pritha or sathe.
Dujonei aat ta ponchash er bus er jonno unmukh hoye thake.
Sohojatritir nam ti o janena.
Roj i bus e jete jete eta seta tuk tak    golpo theke alap, seshe bondhutto.
Dujonei onekbar nam jante cheyeche, tarpor nijerai decide koreche nam thak.
Benamii bondhutto thakuk ekta nahoy.
Er bondhutto Prithake Rajat er theke aro dure soriye dichche Pritha bujhte pare.
Kintu seta bujheo Pritha kichhu korte parena.
Bodrolok bibahito.
Obabngali.Hyderabad e bari.Chalri sutre edeshe.
Pritha neme jabar por du stop porei bhodroloker office.
Kon office setao jane,ki kaj kore tao jane.Phone number o ache.
Kintu sokal atta ponchash er bus chhara dekha hoy na oder.
Phone e ekbar sokale check kore ney dujon bus ta dhorte parbe kina.
Er baire dekha ba kotha hoyna.
Prithar ek ek somoy mone hoy take phone kore, or sathe prem kore.
Kintu phone er number dial kore o ,phone ta kore uthte pareni.

Lokta jodi bibahito na hoto tahole Pritha or sathei prem korto mone hoy.
Preme je ektu poreche, seta Pritha ektu bojhe.
Rajat er Prithar durotter phanke ei bhodrolok dhuke geche.
Rajat er sathe durotto komate hole eke ber korte hobe?
Kintu Rajat er o sei effort ta nei.
O to shei chirokaler chhonnochhra baundule i hoye thakbe.

Dosh bochore ekta bachcha ashle bodhhoy bhalo hoto.

Rajat to bachcha o chay ni.

Rajat ashole kono bondhonei abodhdho thakte chayni.
Prithai jor kore.
Seta bhul i korechhilo ekhon seta bojhe.
Dujone alada hoye gele hoyto dujoner subidhe.
Kintu eka eka Pritha korbe ta ki?
Shei bhodrolok to tar bouke chhhere Prithar kache ashbe na.
Ar ashlei bochhor doshek por sob somporko teto lagbe abar.
Abar dujoner durotte kono tritiyo bekti r abirbhab hobe.

Ei circle choltei thake bodhhoy.

Cha niye Pritha computer er facebook niye boshlo.

Kichhukhkhon narachhara kore bedroom e gelo.
Rat pray egarota baje.
Rajat bairer ghore phone e karur sathe.
Mukhe creme lagiye Rajat er kache jabe bhablo.
Pechhon theke joriye dhore ador korbe?
Kotodin Rajat ke ador o koreni.
Rajat o joriye dhoreni.
Pashapashi shuleo dujon dupash phire gumay.
Majhratre ghumer ghore hath lege geleo Prithar hath ta Rajat soriye dey.
Victoria Secret er ratribash ta Pritha porlo aj.
Jama ta Prithar jonmodine or i bandhobi kine diyechhilo.
Chul ta thik korlo.
Bolechhilo, Rajat er samne pore dekhish, o pagol hoye jabe.
Pagol ajkal oke dekhe Rajat hoyna.
Eksathe sejeguje berole o ekbar o Rajat bolena bhalo lagche.
Majhe sajhe Pritha jiggesh korle Rajat boleche,'Sarita unchu kore poro keno, Petta dhako, kinba Mota lagche.
Er beshi comment Pritha payni.
Ekhon ar jiggesh o korena.
Negative comment shonar cheye na shona bhalo.
Borong bus e uthlei ekgal hashi niye ekjon bole,'Looking pretty......kingba this color really suits you well..'
Majhe majhe bole,'you are so beutiful,your husband must be lucky to have you.'

Tai ki?

Mone hoyna.

Jai hok, gaye perfume ta ektu choriye Rajat er kache Pritha guti guti paye royna holo.

Perfume tao Victoria Secrets er.
Setao bandhobi r deouya.
Ektu chora gondho kintu bhaloi.

Rajat er kache jetei, phone ta kaner kach thke soriye Rajat bollo,'Amar deri hobe phone e, tumi shute jao..'
Pritha back kore bedroom er dike jete jete sunte pelo,' Ki chora gondher baje perfume lagiyecho, matha dhore gelo ekebare......'

Doram kore bedroom er dorja ta bondho korlo Pritha.

Copyright .....@ Manidipa

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